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 Post Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2014 1:15 am 
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http://sluggy.com/comics/archives/daily/141113

In panel 4, word bubble 1, there should be a space after "on a page."

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 Post Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 12:38 am 
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Today's panel 4 could use a period at the end.

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 Post Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2014 10:52 am 
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http://www.sluggy.com/comics/archives/daily/141114, panel 8, should be "it never leaves youR side."

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 Post Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 1:06 am 
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Today: "wanted control its summoning" -> "wanted to control its summoning" or "wanted control of its summoning"

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 Post Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:34 am 
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And as rowsdowner said, it should be "its summoning," not "it's summoning." "it's" == "it is".

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 Post Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 1:05 am 
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today: "the vault is it's a good old" -> "the vault is good old"

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 Post Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2014 12:30 am 
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In the first panel, I believe the German word for "mine" is spelled mein rather than mien.

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 Post Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 6:03 am 
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LadyBlanc wrote:
11-21-14

In the first panel, I believe the German word for "mine" is spelled mein rather than mien.

LB


Seconded.

Also, in panel 5, "That vault is it's a good American ingenuity." I'm assuming you meant to say, "That vault is a good American ingenuity."

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 Post Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:23 am 
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Tormuse wrote:
LadyBlanc wrote:
11-21-14

In the first panel, I believe the German word for "mine" is spelled mein rather than mien.

LB


Seconded.

Also, in panel 5, "That vault is it's a good American ingenuity." I'm assuming you meant to say, "That vault is a good American ingenuity."


I think just "That vault is good American ingenuity."

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 Post Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 12:39 pm 
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Yes, that would be better than what I said. :)

In today's comic, panel 3, "we are bared in," ...since they're not naked, I'm assuming you meant "we are barred in." :)

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2014 9:09 am 
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In the 12-16-2014 strip, "you'll die to" should be "you'll die too."

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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2014 12:19 am 
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"At least she's not dead, or she wouldn't have been able to bring her through the door ward!" should probably be "At least she's not dead, or you wouldn't have been able to bring her through the door ward!"

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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2014 12:15 am 
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It imprisons and transform the dead -> transforms

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 Post Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2015 1:22 am 
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150103: Your a scared little coward -> You're

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 Post Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 2:46 am 
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"Public Option Against the Harassers", I think they would have more of an "Opinion" against them.

Unless the Public Option is some sort of government plan to permanently handle the Harrassers problem...

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